Manga Panel - Walk Away

I wanted to show my attempt at doing a manga panel so here it is. It is kinda badly laid out but it is fine ^^ it was just an attempt.

Basically Daisuke got Kathryn pregnant but due to a fight, he wants nothing to do with her or in keeping his promise of taking care of his child. If I continue this on it will be basically Daisuke is nowhere to be seen and due to immense emotional and psychological stress, Kathryn suffers from it. She attacks out of nowhere and keeps herself locked up, slowly killing herself. The story revolves more around their daughter who goes out to find her father in order to solve what has happened.